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Wednesday 29 July 2015

Our Father

WALT:Identify the number of petitions in the Our Father Prayer and to intepret the meaning of those petitions.


Our Father, Who art in heaven
Hallowed be Thy Name
Thy kingdom come
Thy will be done
on earth as it is in heaven.
Give us this day our daily bread - asking the Lord for food
and forgive us our trespasses - forgive our sins
as we forgive those who trespass against us
and lead us not into temptation
but deliver us from evil. Amen.

Tuesday 28 July 2015

Healthy Lunches

Learning Intention:    


Walt: Analyse text to identify examples of ethos, pathos and logos.  


Persuasive Reading Analysis:https:healthy Lunches
Take another look at the persuasive piece of reading/ writing.
What strategies does the author use to try to persuade you?
Below are strategies writers often use for this form of writing.  Read through each
strategy and decide whether the author used that strategy by writing yes or no in the second
column. If you write yes, then explain how the author used that strategy.
Persuasive strategy
Yes / No
How the author used it?
Claim – States the main  
point or stance
Yes
The author said “That children should eat and drink healthy food everyday in school to be healthy’!   
Big Names –  Mentions experts and
important people to support the argument
Yes
In some schools children are provided with milk that is delivered fresh every morning.
This author is trying to convince children
aged 5 - 12 to eat healthy and make healthy lunches so that they could are a model for younger children.    
Logos – Uses logic, numbers, or  facts to support the argument
Yes
Milk is known to support healthy teeth and bones. Fizzy drinks are not good for teeth because the sugar in  fizzy drinks causes decay.
should be should be banned from school because it is not healthy and it will rot their teeth, and that is the school's rule.   Children have to eat fruit and vegetables everyday because it will keep all of them healthy.
Pathos – Appeals to the audience’s emotions
Yes
Inferring from the text the writer is emphasising the importance that children should eat a healthy lunch to help them grow strong and healthy.                        
Ethos – Tries to build trust and
credibility
Yes
The writer assumes that the reader has knowledge of healthy food and eating .habits but does not include evidence of research
Kairos – Builds a sense of urgency  
for the cause
Yes
He emphasises  what will happen to a child's’ teeth and bones if they do not eat well.
Research – Uses studies and  
information to make the  argument seem more convincing;  
this can be in the form of words,
graphs, tables, or illustrations
No


Friday 24 July 2015

Homework Must Be Banned

LI:Analyse text to identify examples of ethos, pathos, and logos
The Minister of Education

I am writing this because students are working hard in school but why are teachers giving us homework when we are working hard in school and when students go home with homework they feel tired and exhausted and they can’t think properly in their homework and some students didn’t finish their homework because they need sleep(rest) .

Teachers needs to ban homework so students can rest and have a good night sleep but teachers doesn’t want to ban homework and the students feel sad because they work hard in school but teachers wanted more assignments that's why we need to ban homework , Children are doing there best on school and they really want to go home and rest their mind for tomorrow.